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EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv144yr
2020-10-17 00:25

I decided to write a review mainly because this novel didnt have one. The story is great, has good world background, and updates relatively frequently. So far, I’m loving the plotline and idea of the story, very unique. Only real problem is that one chapter isn’t in English but I’m assuming it was just describing the world cause i skipped it and it was fine. Real good read even if you start now, when there is only seven chapters.

GodKing of Life

Fir3Cooz
4.5
69 Chs

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Fir3Cooz
Fir3CoozAuthor

Thank you, it's really nice and encouraging. Sorry for the mistakes, English is not my native language.

4yr
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EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv14

Its alright, I completely understand. A lot of good writers, in my opinion, dont speak English as there native language.

Fir3Cooz:Thank you, it's really nice and encouraging. Sorry for the mistakes, English is not my native language.
4yr
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Fir3Cooz
Fir3CoozAuthor

The chapter that was not in English is now in English, it was a mistake.

EverythingRelevant:Its alright, I completely understand. A lot of good writers, in my opinion, dont speak English as there native language.
4yr
1
ErjasD
ErjasDLv13

Hoping for some romance and harem😃

Fir3Cooz:The chapter that was not in English is now in English, it was a mistake.
4yr
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Writing activity is tested. My first one wasn't very good so I'm trying to improve. My problem is that now I may be taking too much time to describe things and repeating myself a bit. It's just that when I'm writing, I imagine the scene drawn in manga so I detail it as much as I can. I'm not a person with great creativity and inspiration either, so please be indulgent and criticize intelligently. Thank you for reading.

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Everthing has a limit. This novel have a good plot, but i am at chapter 10 and nothing happened at all! ten chapters only of prologue and dumping of information. I can not take it anymore! Sorry but for now I am abandoning this novel, maybe I will try again in a few days because I am really interested in the plot, but if this dump of information continues I will end up dropping it permanently.

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