Review Detail of sherryrivera1967 in I Have to be an Alchemist?

I have really enjoyed this novel. I have enjoyed the world these characters have been forced to live in. I look forward to reading each chapter because it has the right amount of suspense. You grow to care for the characters especially Todd. The only suggestions for improvement I will make are for grammar especially the appropriate use of periods and for more detailed character descriptions. I also wish to thank the author for the wonderful ideas and descriptions about alchemy.