the story is quite lacking, most of the plot is too forced like when his mother died and suddenly the ancient one is visiting so he can train his ability, the timeskip also didnt help as it feels reading a summary rather than a story then you suddenly add tony stark out of the blue, and just like with other conversations they speak like robot or badly written script from a 3rd rate author, pepper alrrady demanded that he speak with tony immediately, she should first ask if he's already fine first or if he needs any thing, your mc is a robot and everyone else is a robot

Feels forced as the mother just randomly dies out of nowhere. no one came to get the mc who is a child that has no relatives (child protective services and ****). Ancient one coming out of nowhere too, like ik the mc background is supposed to be very tragic with no father and mother just died but that **** is, although not extremely common still happens all around the world and with more horrible/tragic things that happen to children so why does the ancient one choose to get him. Like no this **** is too forced I can't get myself to read this. Maybe someone else may find this nice but to me this aint good. Maybe if the author rewrites it with some common sense added into it I might read this again.

The story had its flaws, but was interesting, until the author decided to edit and make changes making it far less interesting and no longer worth reading.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

Por favor haz un harem, no tiene que ser gran 3 o 2 y si no minimo algo de romance. please please please please please please please please please

I just despise combining MCU with X-Men.

there is not much to say the grammar is good but the rest is level the story is emotionless the characters look like robots the mc has a bipolar personality time he is serious time he is childish the use of the gamer system is incredibly underused the powers have little potential in the long run looking like they were chosen at random, and I could stay here all day listing the downsides.

Story is great most people go stay to overpowered and ruins the story. Only real complaint is the grammer(?) Is a bit choppy. It does not flow.very well at times staging the.reader out of the story most of the time but they story does have potential

don't read this is a trash beta loser MC story the author introduce the MC as someone who has will then it spin to trash emo wank fest the MC went to train with ancient one just to get to his world the MC didn't even bother killing the family that neglected to protect their child which led to his mother death the way the author write is too rigid forceful and he seems to want to do drama which is him just wanting to be edgy what a disappointment

It was better at first but after the edit the story was a mess I lost interest continueing.. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣