Review Detail of CrimsonMoonLover in Finding The One

The story good and make one wonder who she will choice or which one is better for her. One is the typical play boy and the other is the good guy. The question is who will the Female lead choose 🤔. The writing could need some work on thought and a tip is when they are talking, put some kind of symbol like " " or - . for it to be more understandable. It can be sometimes confusing to understand if she is thinking or talking.😁 Keep up the good work, you are nearly there!!😉☺☺