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Review Detail of Banga in The Pharaoh and a Jade

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Banga
BangaLv23yrBanga

I wouldn't say, I am hooked to the novel yet, but I like the plot, its new and its good. The Grammar was off at times , but apart from that I have no other complaints. The story development speed is good, I hope it stays the same. Great job author and I hope the review is of some use to you .😁

The Pharaoh and a Jade

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Thanks for the review!❀ I appreciate your honesty! and yes I know that’s one of the major flaws, which I’m trying to improve. If I can republish it again, I will do so. But I think it’s going to mess with my chapters đŸ€ŠđŸ»â€â™€ïž