Review Detail of LinYang in Nonn

Good start. Quite heart-wrenching when Jaden... Anyways. I like seeing the friendships between your MC and her friends. A couple of notes, though: -Careful of punctuation, especially at the end of dialogue, though I noticed that you have gotten better at it as the story went on. -Choose a tense between present and past, otherwise it is a little jolting to read. -Careful also of using Korean characters. I believe that they have gotten your novel blacklisted. If you want your novel to be whitelisted again so people can vote and it appears on your profile, shoot the Webnovel team an email. Overall, it's getting quite good. Keep writing every day, author!