I love the premise of this story! Overall writing quality was pretty good, though there were some mistakes here and there as well as some parts that could be smoothed out, but that all could be fixed with a quick edit. Right now there are only two chapters out so I can't say much for plot or characters, but I'm looking forward to seeing the author and story grow!
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