With a bit of editing this is perfect, I love the plot and how your description of the characters are they are relatable for me and they are also well written, I also love the settings and the portrayal of Filipino culture as well as the delicacies, it makes me hungry for the foods that are portrayed, yum. Keep on writing đŻ and don't lose the motivation to write I'm cheering you on đ
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