Review Detail of Avidfan in Packing Up My Work

Item: Packing Up My Work
Rating: 5

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AvidfanLv133yrAvidfan

The English is definitely good since writer is a native:) The story are interesting and easy to follow the MC. Definitely worth following. Wish the chapters are longer:) Only con is (may not be a con) is the mention of gym class in a ancient setting. I'm not sure if there are gym in the ancient setting. It should be routine class or routine training session?

Packing Up My Work

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NOLONGERAUSERAuteurNOLONGERAUSER

It’s kind of a mix of both, there’s a king, but there’s also Limos, businesses and mansions, and certain resposibilities are given to certain parts of the Royal Bureau. But thank you so much, and I’ll work on getting longer chapters!

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