Review Detail of iam_adh in the lion and the tulip

I like this story, it's very interesting I like the concepts of it. I believe this has immense potential, however, for it to reach its highest point I suggest that the grammar be worked on it. It's a little hard for me to enjoy the story because I noticed many grammatical errors. Besides that though, its still a good story I love the way how the author shows things instead of telling us, I really like. If only comics did that... Any, I wish the author the best of luck!