Review Detail of _Goodies_ in My dream to be The Greatest Trainer

The paragraph is so big, grammar is decent, but still have errors along the line. A lot of punctuation mistakes, and plot is too boring I could not get through chapter fourteen and here I am, about to drop another fanfic. It's the same old cliche and the guy goes to the world of Pokemon type of novel. Please, add a twist aside from Covid-19, and character design? Little to no descriptions about the characters at all. Dialogues are simply boring, and the pace is too slow.