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Review Detail of SilentMild in Dead Invasion: The Cursed Ordeal

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Aside from spelling and grammar errors, the story has potential. The author needs to work harder to master the basics of writing without forgetting to enjoy the journey. Cheers! More chapters to come!

Dead Invasion: The Cursed Ordeal

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Thank you. I'll make sure to improve the bits that you hinted on.