Beside spelling errors, there's a few missing complete thoughts and some wrong choice of words, ei., "his" should be "he's", an abbreviation of "he is". Nevertheless, it has a good story. The 3 MC are well developed within this short story. I can relate with each one of them for I've read many romance novels and I've watched too much of Asian drama series for experience. Though the story ends differently than I've imagine before reading this, it is unexpected and very good. I am totally satisfied with the 5 chapters novel.
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