Review Detail of Eggy_does_writing in Winter's Storm

I've read a couple of chapters and the story is pretty great so far! Winter is a really interesting character. This feels like a dark, ***** version of Cinderella. I like how the author describes the settings and the appearance of characters. The character design is great and it's clear who the audience is supposed to root for and who the audience is supposed to hate. The only things I didn't like were the grammatical errors along with an inconsistency about Winter's mother. One moment, they say she was a maid and another moment, they say she was an escort. Overall, this story is pretty great so far!