Review Detail of LostThe50_50 in A Lucky? Dude Journey
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Look man, im really trying to not be rude but its hard, so i'll just say it as is......the story just became more degenerate as we came from chapter 1 till 6? Im still staying cause im hoping to actually see anything unique.....despite already knowing that this will probably dissapoint...by that i mean....the relationships are dissapointing, all character development was guttered the moment author decided to make the mc manipulate kids to become cumdumpsters(no thats not wrong, its the correct term. Dont call it love when you manipulate them from young). I can pretty much 'stereotype" what will happen from then onward, a big time skip, he's OP. He'll show his inexperience in a fight even if he could just beat the living sh*t out of the enemy. Have lots of R-18. no character development. He'll still act stupid as he grows.......It's.....almost too bland... im staying because i really hope im wrong...................also because im running out of sh*t to read.
A Lucky? Dude Journey
KimYurin
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LostThe50_50:P.S. Im still just around chapter 6-7.....i'll change this.......if it gets better......
I guess the first few chapters were really taken out of context, to be fair though, as much as this review makes the MC to look be a scum, he's far more decent than other MCs of similar fanfic genre, the small amount of NSFW chapters is already a telltale of that. Though I admit there are so much flirting with his harem in the story, but what can you expect from a harem-focused slice of life fanfic. For those who might be discouraged by this review, give it a chance if you don't mind the things I've mentioned above. For a fanfic, the way the author made the secondary characters useful and actually have presence in this story, while not overly focusing on them so as to not take away the limelight from the MC, is something amazing that I wish I to see more in other fanfics.