Oooook.So not only the grammar is bad,but caligraphy is ****,like kiking instead of kicking.Moera instead of Moira or another example: when Thea's mother called her and told her about the wedding and it was something like: Thea run to her room and closed the door,Thea wanted to move and confort her crying in her arms but could only watch as Thea ran inside.It is an example.My advice read 2-3-4-5 times and correct all your mistakes.I like the premise,about transmigration,about mc relationship.But copy-paste ability is too bat **** crazy op.Better do something more complicated:reincarnate mc with 2x powers,1x superpower or smth,and 1x leveling system or absorb part of enemy stats upon their defeat,like 10% of their strenghts,smth,cuz copy paste is way too op
