Mc is weak as **** i think mc could be more stronger and intrlligent i don't wait for him yo be wise it can come with time but knowing all about naruto yet this is so unreasonable losing ancient magic and divinity for reasoning both energies can't coexist together i can even accept that but he could get bijuu or few bloodlines and byakugan byaku**** mc didn't even master byakugan he had tons of time with even school and can find a few ways.Lots of potenial yet turning it to thrash i don't do criticism normally but this is truely no i have respect for Author but i didn't stop reading after first chapter maybe Author can get better Author got better but not much and with an Editor he/she-him/her problem can be changed and for system please make it more reasonable with time if you want to improve system i think Author has potenial but can't use that potenial
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