The story is really good but the writing is terrible. Everything that happens is summed up right after it happens. There are also tons of grammatIcal errors which force you to read the sentence again. It also seems like the author forgets things about the character then later remembers and explains it off as something the character did that we didn’t see.
vinayraj
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