The story is interesting. The main character seems to hop between two lives. I would like to see how he overcomes this issue. The writing quality is good. There are some typos like leggs for legs. But that does not interfere with the flow of the story. The stability of updates is good. The Story is developing nicely. The Character design and the world background have been well designed. All the best.
KageMugen
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