I love the premise of the story! Chapters can still improve after a round of edit. I suggest you do that once you've reached chapter 10. Keep up the good work and best wishes to you and to our little John in the story. Also, I would appreciate it if you can drop a review of my novel too—The Last Dragon Hunter. Thanks in advance!
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COMMERenovator:Thank you very much for the review, i'll go check out your Last Dragon Hunter Novel and give my thoughts about it :)
QuidSevilla:thank you! It's an honor to receive your review, Senpai Renovator