First, the chapters are too short. The trial 60 chapters should be about 25 chapters at most. There isn't any story development to speak about The entire 60 chapters seem to be circling around the same place. The FL character is unbelievably stupid. She makes you disdain her because she is totally lacking a brain or personality for that matter. What world background?! That said, the story is acceptable considering the recent wave of contemporary romances. At least the ML hasn't raped the FL so far.
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