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The only thing good about this novel is the idea of the plot that's it as for oyher aspects read below. Main character -Is stupid. eg-He bought cure for his mother then forgot to give her. Story-Full of holes . eg- there are so many cultivators but none can judge others cultivation level its just you can fly yuo are a titled one. Other charecters-they try to act cunning but are forced by author act out the face slapping routine that to not properly. SO PLEASE AVOID READING IT UNLESS YOU ARE A AUTHOR WHO WANT'S TO LEARN HOW NOT TO WRITE A NOVEL

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