Review Detail of AxlSLL in Yanhua

You, the author, have a clever use of words and the way you move them. The scenery and details flow smoothly elegant, and the characters feel more than human enough. The main character's determinism is well implemented. Some scenes can be confusing at first, due to a little bit of lacking context, (especially the ones involving the fox), and sure sometimes the descriptions overextend a little bit. You also like to use the word "and". But nothing critical nor anything that makes the story tedious nor fall dull and flat. This is a solid, smooth work we're talking about. Well done.