Hey author, if you continue this story then I have a suggestion that you could do if you haven't already planned. So from the beginning we can see that the MC went from nice to scum because of some incident which eventually made him do something he regrets. So basically for the girl that he rapes, I think after he gets out of prison somehow then you should let him find her and make her his lover or harem member depending on which way your going. But make it like he does all he can to apologize and she can still hate him and he does everything for her for a long time for her to slowly change her feelings about him eventually falling in love with him. That's a suggestion I recommend since from the first chapter you just made me feel really bad and I don't want that to be the conclusion of the situation
Charlottes
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COMMEHello Charlottes, it's been around a month since you posted this. I'm not trying to pressure you into writing a novel you don't want to I just want to know if you are going to resume this. I know you have many other books to work on so if you don't have time for this book then I understand
Charlottes:Actually I already had the Chapter 2 of this novel, well yeah I am planning that but I'm still trying to think through wait for a week or so I'll resume this.
It's been about 5 months since I posted this review and you haven't written it. This is my first time doing something like this because usually I just give up if nobody writes their novel but if you look at the amount of power stones I have given then you can see why I want you to continue
Charlottes:Actually I already had the Chapter 2 of this novel, well yeah I am planning that but I'm still trying to think through wait for a week or so I'll resume this.
I feel guilty, so fine I wasn't really planning to continue this but... alright let me resume this Monday though I sound update often I'll be just 2 chapter a week at most.
dFuZeJoker:It's been about 5 months since I posted this review and you haven't written it. This is my first time doing something like this because usually I just give up if nobody writes their novel but if you look at the amount of power stones I have given then you can see why I want you to continue
Charlottes:I feel guilty, so fine I wasn't really planning to continue this but... alright let me resume this Monday though I sound update often I'll be just 2 chapter a week at most.