After suffering through the bad grammar and understanding, I have decided to abandon this fic at chapter 83. The amount of information placed into this fic is inconsistent and it lacks a concept, therefore I have decided to abandon it. However, this tale has an incredible opening, as well as a world-building that's also imaginative, powerful, and passionate. One of the finest I've ever read. In my experience, if your character is significant enough to have a name, they are also significant enough to have a purpose. As far as I can tell from what I've read so far, Akashi's character development is purely for narrative purposes; Akashi has a basic goal, which is to live an easy and pleasant existence. The way you conclude your tale will be remembered by readers for the longest time. I have a lot of thoughts, but for the time being, this is all I have to conclude.
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