Review Detail of Daoist257162 in Legend of the fist immortal

TBH i was not expecting anything from a noobie author,but i must say it is very interesting the plot looks like it will be a shook'er there are some funny moments in it so far and that's good i like that but.a teenager like you actually want to write because you like to read and that's good other than some of those no lifers out there.anyway keep it up and i'm waiting for more chapters to come out :D.