Review Detail of MannyTheManticore in Black dragon of hate _ High School DXD Fanfic

Item: Black dragon of hate _ High School DXD Fanfic
Rating: 3.4

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MannyTheManticoreLv43yrMannyTheManticore

the story over all is okay it's just not only is the grammar actually giving me a headache and some of the words used should be replaced with words that makes sense in the context in certain sentences it's like you typed it with autocorrect turned on and everybody knows how that thing does not work

Black dragon of hate _ High School DXD Fanfic

Kriuswer

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KriuswerAuteurKriuswer

It was my first novel. And my current English is so much better. Probably, if I want to come back to this novel. Then I will have to correct it and read it from the beginning. So I suggest taking a look at my current novel that I am writing.

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