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It's Okay maybe hard for those who not watched or read the anime to follow good enough writing to enjoy the character development is lacking but the mc is funny and interesting so people can overlook some flaws like how the 2 girls love him sure they are pervs, attracted to him and closest to him but you could have them have a flashback to a scene that made them particularly close like first meeting

Nura Clan: Reborn as the young Master

Tristan175

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Thanks for the review. Just noticed it. It Ain’t finished and it isn’t even above 30 yet. So I kinda feel a ‘review’ is to early not to mention I’m doing this All of my iPhone. But I appreciate the criticism.