Honestly I think every HP Fan Fic writer should read the story. His system not nearly as overpowered as some, it made Petunia not hate a baby, 1 potion for free and a recipe to make it, it makes him learn faster but he still had to train several hours a day for months to lean a spell, it gives him ingredients for something he still has to craft himself. That is a good system, help you do something not do it for you. Him becoming a stock broker is a great idea, investing in Microsoft or Nintendo back in the 80's would have made anyone money. And that is Legitimate money. Too many have the MC and an army of house elves stealing from every wizard and or criminal in Britain. Wizard's pay income tax too, so how is he going to claim that money? This Story has some of the most extensive world building I have seen. IMO it is only second to 'Ron Weasley: A noble's Ascension'. Tis story covers a lot of both muggle and magical USA and Britain. Having most of the Harem be with his ***** Harvey form a lot less of a problem morally (if that bothered you at all) Adult Mind + Adult Body = Harem Time. The idea of 'Be what a person wants or needs and they will love you for it', is a whole lot better that some stories were the romance can be broken do to 'You got hole, let's f@ck'. All in all a great story and I hope the author gets back to it
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