Review Detail of Elmer_Melendez in Great Expert Ninja-Naruto Fanfic (My Version)

Awe man I wrote the review on the novel that you dropped but I’ll just sum up what I wrote so I wrote that the story is absolutely fantastic and I think you should keep up the good work but maybe you should try to find a better way to shorten the explanations of the MC abilities cause it can become pretty confusing and I only understood some of the abilities after he used them in combat but aside from that and a few grammar mistakes that story is almost a perfect ten out of ten