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2019-12-14 00:34

Finally catched up with the story ✌🏻✌🏻... annnd thank you for this great novel i really enjoy it especially the avatar ark it was will written I liked the development of the MC personality one strong point of this fanfic is there is actually a story not just the harm and XXX keep going 👍 👍

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