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CornboyRay
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2019-09-21 00:41

It has 100+ chapters and I dropped after 18. Why? Because it's not good of course. If you like original characters(original MC), stability in the structure of plot, and over all creativity, then the book is NOT(I repeat, NOT) for you. If you want a MC who doesn't care for the vast beautiful anime/manga worlds that are just meant for exploring, An MC who is old af for no reason (literally claims "I like my wrinkles"to which any old person one would ask would say that's a dam lie), And is overall just boring and OP for the sake of being OP? Then this is for you.

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Vallori
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If this helps, the novel is not defined by its beginning. It becomes a WHOLE other novel later down the line. But the choice to keep reading or dropping is up to you. Have a good day!

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Nah already skin read into chapter 200 and I fully agree with what @ComboRay say, the story is about OP MC for being sake Op. There's really no point on making mc as an old man former cold blooded killer if in later chapter mc suddenly become so pussy that he hesitate to kill someone, he act more like your typical Teenager who act retard while thinking that his act is cool.

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Vallori’s Pen is such that when wielded it borders on the martial. – A Nameless Deity Let me start dear reader that by saying that to consider not picking up this novel because of perceived reading preferences is a mistake. If you’re looking for the next great web novel this is the one. If I have your attention and you are interested in some of my reasons for saying so keep reading, if not start A New Path now and skip this review. From structure to planning, from timing to prose. A New Path is a masterclass in the internet format of storytelling. The best of the best. And at two quality chapters a day, dear reader you have no excuse to not read this. You won't find a better crossover from any other master on the web. You would be lucky to find an equal. On other websites included. A New Path is the Alpha and the Omega crossover story, you won't be disappointed. Two deliberate steps from flying too high, Vallori lived while Icarus fell. – The Immortal Poet Vallori’s skills in planning and structure reveal themselves in the franchises chosen. The franchises Vallori has in store for the reader are all keystones in their respective mediums. Vallori’s Pen creates the opportunity for substance in spades, yet obscure nomenclature and set pieces are left where they belong. As if lighting the way for the less perfect, the franchise characters in this crossover are not the sole structure that holds the story together. These characters stand upon the shoulders of the giant of a lead that Vallori created. A metaphor for and monument to improvement in perpetuity. Even as the timeless burn Vallori’s Pen sharpens. – A Terrified Devil The lead character Portgas D Dragon is raw and emotional in his interaction with the story’s characters, and powerful in the ripples created in worlds he visits. Starting strong but lifeless, and leading into a fervent crescendo that is heard across the multiple franchises’ universes. In a moment of quiet genius Vallori has set up Dragon to live more after his death and reincarnation than prior to it. Constantly given soul as Vallori’s Pen further touches Dragon time and time again. If history is any teacher, the list of reasons in favor of reading A New Path will be as long as the gift of the world Vallori has been so gracious to share. This is but a few. – Oath, a reader in awe

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