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I have a issues with the character personality, 1. Batman is like out of character, he didn't brood he agreed fast specially on flash when making and suggest his plan. I mean flash dictate the battle with darkside. I think batman didnt even think and just go with the flow specially when flash suggest something. 2. Caitlyn Snow is so different from the tv show and in your fic. In tv show 1st season she can't get over on her dead ex boyfriend Ronnie turned Firestorm but on your fic she easily get hooked by your MC/Barry. 3. No character background and build up in this fic like it centers all in Barry and side character like cisco and wells and others are like normal NPC from the game and when the plot needed them and you need to write a dialogue, you include them, they just there like no other personality and just needed to make the plot progress. Issue here is how the character develop but I really love OP mc in fanfic I hope this fic get better. Reccomend you read shawn129 fic, flash there has depth characterization and hes OP too.

INTO THE FLASH.

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