Review Detail of EvilMushroom in Supreme Commander General

I think this novel is a summary of a novel haha Its way too fast No explanations and what ever about some other things The card can show you what you killed while its his first time in the guild...how? Although magic works but how? Then the princess...wtf? First time they met they already have feelings in each other.. Imagine the archers equipped with bowl....hmmm The chapter you released can be transformed into longer ones from 10 it will atleast be 30 if its detailed This will be a good one and i think it will be if it more detailed not if its not that fast.. Its early to decide Im just being honest