Review Detail of DragonTreasures in Who needs a cheat power when you can summon slimes?

I think it's definitely a good start! I'd like to see you format your story a little bit differently, maybe add shorter paragraphs,and more dialog, but it's definitely a pretty fine piece that I hope to see grow. However, I'd like to see you add more characters, and show things more than tell. For instance, when that thing happens to him in the first chapter, with his mother, perhaps you could paint the scene rather than detail the uncanny aftermath? Keep improving, and hope you find you get better every chapter you write!