Trite, contrived, mediocre, milquetoast, *******ish, infantile, cliche-and-gonorrhea-ridden paean to conformism, eye-****ed me, affront to humanity, war crime, should literally be tried for war crimes, resolutely shit, lacking in imagination, uninformed reimagining of, limp-wristed, premature, ill-informed attempt at, talentless ****fest, recidivistic shitpeddler, pedantic, listless, savagely boring, just one repulsive laugh after another.
Ryocor
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COMMEIt hurts reading something like this, especially after trying to create a good story. Please remember that behind the profiles and names are real people, sometimes really young people, who unlike me are easly badly hurt by reviews like this. If you have such high standarts I recommed writing your own story. Judging by how chaotic your review is I think you will struggle at least as much as me.