Review Detail of ihateyounot in Unmerciful Covenant: The magician, the monster and the witch.

I'm the first reviewer?! Why?! This story is good. The narrative is compelling and I find myself wanting to know more about the protagonist and also the world. Antihero protag? Sign me the f up. Immersion +100! My sharp (petty) eyes spotted some mistakes here and there, but they're really negligeable. Basically non-existent, really. Keep up the good work, I'm rooting for you! P.S: Hopefully you'll continue this story after the contest ends. I want to see how far this story can go, hoh hoh.