Review Detail of AtlasKing in The Reaper's Student

Hi, It's Al. You requested me to try your story a couple weeks ago. I've only recently read your story. Your doing pretty okay for now, okay as in needs more improving but satisfies me a little. Kinda curious when were gonna see some action though. For now, you need to improve your writing skills. Maybe add a little bit more detail to the story so we could see it more clearer, and maybe more updates would help.