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Item: The Demon Sword: Sorataki
Rating: 5

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To be honest, I wasn't expecting much from 3 chapters. But are you actually a professional writer?!? It's so cool and interesting! Can't spoilerino here though :) One cute thing is, I read "girl in a tank" and it took 6 paragraphs to realise it's a water tank, not a military rank!!!! -_-

The Demon Sword: Sorataki

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Thanks for the comment, I want to be a professional writer so means a lot that you say that XD Yeah, that threw me off but I can see that mixup being easily made.

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