Review Detail of HK052 in There is only one you!

I will straight up say... my ratings on stability of updating, character design, and world background shouldnt be taken si seriously. Ive only read the first chapter, no i only read part of the first chapter and can only say that it was very disappointing in comparison to its reviews. The writing quality was so immature that i could read beyong several paragrapgs. There were grammer mistakes and the transition and introduction of ideas were ******* and rather hard to read. From thsi first chapter i also had found the character perceived as perfect which seemed a bit cliche. There may however be a good story line that a person who can ignore poor writing quality.