Review Detail of Kay619 in Ultimate Saiyan God

Writing quality is passable, but could be improved. A little "." and "," could make the sentences better. Some words/phrases are repeated or redundant and must have escaped the author's notice. Updates are uncertain for now. Still too early to decide if its stable, or if its once in a week. Story development is interesting so far. Pacing is ok. As for character design, MC is ok. Interesting backstory. Lacks background on why MC is a killer and not an assassin. Plot is good. I see that author took a little AI chip from Leylin. :) Overall, quite a good start for this novel. Definitely a different league from author's previous work. Kudos and well done for improving.