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Damn, it seems like some readers need context from reviews before reading the novel and not look for criticism instead. So, I'm here to help out those kinds of people, and the author to This story feels like it's gonna be a long-winded one, which is what I am looking for as I do not want novels that abruptly end for no proper reason. Writing quality is the usual, few mistakes here and there, not too shabby. The character design seems to be something that eats up a lot of words within this story, which isn't all too bad considering that it adds to the flavor of the novel itself. Heck, I could tell that it would go into a slice of life route when he gets tremendously powerful. Overall, a fun read. SO FAR
Tycoon - Seeking to Live a Modest Life in a Fantasy World
Cobyboy
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You say the character designs are wordy. Does your statement imply that the author went out of his way to create an actual character with personality, depth and a clear enough description I could create an image in my head. If so that alone makes this story automatically better than 90% of original stories written,since character design are apparently a difficult thing to write for some reason.