Review Detail of SN_Collier in Gaeger

This story is extremely good. The concept of heaven and hell mixing (joining) the mortal world (chap 5) is interesting. I like the idea of the gods and demons dying because of the mortals and the, cause and effect, of killing the gods on the mortals. Other then a small amount of grammar the story is very good. The potential is high, and the unique way of changing POV is very interesting. It's different from only seeing from the mc's POV. I like it very much. I hope to see what happens in the next chap because the history in chap 5 is already very eye catching and interesting. GG