Review Detail of Silver_Moon789 in Idol of Dreams

The story is...ok, but it's also really rushed and the lack of proper grammar kind of hurts my brain a little bit, the character is kind of meh and so is the world, though mostly it's the messy writing that really annoys me, does the author not know how to properly punctuate? If English isn't your first language than I can understand that but if that's the case shouldn't you get a beta reader or something? Also, the story is really rushed, and the MC is kind of all over the place, I'll drop it for now but I'll check on it every once in a while to see if it gets better