Review Detail of Dahlicorn in Hide and Seek(ongoing revision)

Item: Hide and Seek(ongoing revision)
Rating: 5

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DahlicornLv24yrDahlicorn

It was really great with the doll and everything just maybe work on the grammar and the tense a little more I loved the horror but I live in a place where we are CRAZY about horror so it isn't that scary to me it will definitely appeal to others tho

Hide and Seek(ongoing revision)

Naru134

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Naru134AuteurNaru134

Hi thanks for the review I really appreciate it, working on the grammar errors

3yr

Mahaveer_GolechhaLv1Mahaveer_Golechha

Funny

4yr

BlackturtleLv3Blackturtle

Really.

Mahaveer_Golechha:Funny

4yr

Daoist2CLC0FLv1Daoist2CLC0F

hahahah

3yr