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2018-05-04 20:08

Ok so my thoughts on this one: Im sorry to start with the negative stuff.. But it has to be said somewhere.. (1)The storyline is so much cliche that i had to cringe at times. (2)the characters apart from the protagonist/-s are shallow and basic Now to the things why this is one of the best original works i know so far. (1) The narrating style is rly unique and fun to read I would recommend using italic for the problem of how to mark it tho and maby working more with the style in the first few chapters so ur readers are not confused later on (2) ur humor is godlike. I have never seen anything like that and thats why i really recommend reading this one.

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