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Why the mom tho? I hate it
Are you looking for an editor? I could definitely do it for you and I think it would greatly improve your novel's quality. You would get a lot of new readers who drop the story due to its not-so-good grammar. If you're interested just message me back and we could surely figure something out.
Do the other characters not have an origin ability?
This is weird
what?
Again lol, i just hope the author goes with a different route.
Sahhan empire? Really? I don't really wanna be that guy but so far the author hasn't really tried to come up with anything game wise. All that's happened was basically copied from Overgeared.
hidden quest incoming perhaps?
I hope this Duke/daughter pair don't end up being like Duke Steim/Irene. Pls author, just use ur own creativity.
Same here. I guess the author is t<king inspiration from Overgeared. Good to know cuz that novel is fantastic.
Basically like Grid in Overgeared but more limited.
What if the player's name was XXXX?
I don't understand this comment section, but will he play football?
this phrase is written so weirdly or maybe it just lacks commas.