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Bro this novel is still readable and has lot of comedy and that young master has only 2 chps and not shown for now so it was good laugh

its a good read over all but my only complaint was it was too rushed although author created own plot without involving luffy and others much but it felt like face slapping to oda as he created excellent work over 2 decades. Author please don't rush your next novel if you choose to write

105 reviews and there is no negative reviews I think author deleted them and this novel going in cn fic direction so I quit need word count for reviews

not only hot head smokes also as he have smoker fruit smoke smoke fruit as we know form original

This is typical Chinese novel where all girls like mc without him doing much after 99 chapters i quit this as the author written this long ago this novel was like all chinese novels mc kurenai temari haku all like without him doing anythig and haku never betray zabuza because mc word she easily changed i want to rant but read at your own risk

This author thought many ideas and tried to write many fic and burnou without even going into much in the fic written in and abandoned writing. Waste

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Not much explained about world many post apocalypse novels expalin how or what happened to the world. There are many plot holes mc did not have any combat experience but kills everything in single move. It was ok for same stage but 2 stages above he kills effortlessly and hunters who saw mc killed a late qi demon wolf without and scratch and decided to attack him claiming he was 1st stage qi and they did not know his name but after they got killed and resurrected they know his name what a bull and this all happens in just 11 chaps

mass release please

yes Mc played sevaral vr rpg and thinks about all the possibilities and chances to improve his fighting ability but and starts good upto 27 chaptets and get fairy guide and stops thinking even simplest things and it turns worse he got boost to fight an enemy but forget he had good skill that increases his attack powet and panics when boost was about end and was repairminded by fairy it was very boring to read to begin with but it gets even worse