thx

like it so far. thx

he can recruit soldiers in the stormlands but poaching from other realms would be a nono. while spreading the guild around the realm would not make them all loyal to him ,he inserts himself in their life with a positive impact that he can further exploit in the long run. i could think of lots of examples .he can atleast use the guild to build up a good image amongst warriors around the realm and westeros always has been a martial oriented continent. lets see how the author will use the guilds in the end ,i think it has a lot of potentiell to play with.

thx for the chapter, would love some more crossovers (greys anatomy cough) keep it up (=

thanks for the hard work.

good so far (= reminds me of "release that witch", one of my favourite novels. it lacks a little in the details of the kingdom building and the use of his golden finger(like how does he know certain things ?cement, glassmaking,traingplan for speacial ops etc ). but for a fanfic worth a read so far.

thx for the chapter. i vote for quarter final loss and 2 years later EM champions after his improvements

thx for the chapter. u improve at fast pace (=

thx for the chapter. i think its gettin better with each chapter. but its a little to mechanical. i hope for more interactions with other players and coaching staffs. show what and how he tries to improve . maybe get him a mentor like person (his grandfather for example)overall some character development.i wouldnt recommend harem as its not some fantasy novel and its a lot harder to develop the caracters evenly without some of them getting lost in the story with nothing of substance to carry the storyline. better get him a supporting partner to rise alongside him. of course im no expert so take it with a grain of salt and just try to keep it up and improve along the way.[img=recommend]

thx for the chapter. he got in because kimmich got a red card but right after u wrote his first pass was to kimmich

thx for the chapter. i love kingdom building so please dont rush through it (=

sounds good so far (=

thx for the chapter. feel the thunder (=

thx for the chapter

thx for the chapter (=

thx for the chapter

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thx for the chap. i would like luna,she is smart ,thinks different and has a mystery aspect about her that could do well with the system.and she loves animals! in the end its up to you and im sure it will be good and interesting (= some1 unexpected would be nice too

thx for the chapter