The grammar is such a mess that it's difficult to follow the story. Author likes to replace words or sentences into irrelevant things when he/she does not know the proper words to use. almost half of it is gibberish

This story is hilarious. had me laughing until tears were leaking. I don't really care about the fighting, only about the comedy. Keep copy & pasting the story here

Chapters about votes and patreon. Trashy grammar with words missing from sentences. Many words in upper case. Wish fulfillment and cringy power ups from anger and much insults + ranting. Author with anger issues. Darkness rivaling the DC universe. Fake reviews and comments with bad grammar. Set it all aside, and you get a story where the MC internalizes the screaming power up of DBZ + foul language by a kid who loses control and smashes things + very dark story

It would be great if you fixed the pronouns. Him/her/uncle/aunt/he/she etc

Resembles MTL, trashy grammar, unable to follow the story properly He/she grammar issue Wish fulfillment, A lot like other parallel modern earth stories with check-in except this one involves ability and not houses/shares/money etc, decent story with awful translation and lots of nonsense What the heck is "Yingluo"? Is it a thing? A cry for help? How can it be so versatile?

This might as well be MTL, the grammar is just awful

Bullshit, lots of upper case, childish as if heavily influenced by a kid who rages and smashes the keyboard or screen. The names of people and techniques are incorrect, no logic, wish fulfillment and many cannons. The grammar has offensive power that attacks my brain cells. There are many ridiculous things only found in parodies. Kids at 6 already went through puberty..only some. Apparently, they even have knowledge on "birds and bees" This is already AU but author relies heavily on canon. author only changes minor things.

ara ara

When did he change his name to Yang Jing?

This story is great. Very scary.. but a great story nonetheless. The protagonist has the protagonist aura with luck but also is a smart MC. The story progresses very slowly when it comes to certain parts for suspense, story is not fast paced. Expect to get the chills and goosebumps, do not read in a dark setting like i did.

Machine Translation, the grammar is awful. there is almost no use of "is" and is almost always "was" or "had". Past tense is all messed up. He, she also cannot be trusted because a machine cannot determine he or she through chinese and context It is an otherwise good story

huh?

toughest baby scale*

your words are so confusing. you cannot jump from A to B and then go back to describing A while making everyone think you're describing B

so frickin' vulgar

steal dungeon

it has now turned into a chique

what? long story short, it is not unique to her physique